How a story is built
English Language Arts 9 · maddyhelps.com
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Circle the best answer for each question. Use the space to note the evidence or reasoning that decided it.
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Read: “The trail had disappeared under fresh snow an hour ago. Eli's water bottle was frozen solid, the light was going, and the ridge he had to cross was lost in cloud.” The main conflict in this passage is
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Read: “‘You're wearing that?’ her sister said. ‘It's a party, not a funeral.’ Mira looked down at her grey sweater. ‘I like it,’ she said, and went upstairs to change.” This exchange mainly reveals that Mira
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Two versions of the same moment. Version 1: “I told Coach I was fine. My knee felt like it was full of broken glass.” Version 2: “Rosa told the coach she was fine and jogged back to the bench.” What does the first-person version tell the reader that the other does not?
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A story's events, in order: Dana is chosen to give the graduation speech. She practises for weeks but freezes at every rehearsal. At graduation, she drops her notes, looks out at the crowd, and decides to speak without them. Afterward, her little sister asks for help with a speech of her own. The climax of this story is when
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Read: “Marcus told everyone the dent was already there when he borrowed the bike, and by lunch he almost believed it himself. Across town, Mrs. Hale looked at the photo she had taken of the spotless bike that morning and wondered how long his story would last.” This passage is told from which point of view?
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Read: “Leah stared at the empty net. Suddenly she was seven again, in her grandmother's driveway, a tennis ball bouncing off the garage door while Gran called, ‘Again. Higher this time.’ The whistle blew, and she was back on the ice.” The part about Gran's driveway is
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Read: “I watched Sam read the note. His face didn't change at all. Then he folded it into a tiny square and put it in his back pocket.” What can this narrator not know for certain?
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Read: “Two days earlier, the town had put up signs warning that the slough ice was too thin. Owen had been away at his cousin's farm. Now he laced his skates, grinning, and pushed off toward the middle.” The main source of suspense in this passage is that
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Read: “The answer key had slipped out of Mr. Brandt's folder, and nobody had seen it fall. Ayla thought about her mark, and about her mother's face when she opened the last report card. Then she thought about Mr. Brandt, who had stayed after school three times to help her.” The main conflict here is best described as
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A story opens with Jonah refusing to get into the family's boat at the lake while his parents lose patience. Halfway through, a flashback shows him at six, when a canoe tipped and he was underwater for a long moment before his dad pulled him out. Placing the flashback halfway through, rather than at the start, mainly